tume tume boli sabhien kuhanti se tumera mane kichi nahin tume jebe mote tume boli kuha ete mitha kahinpain hum ete mitha kahin pain. suruja chanda sabhien chuinle se chuanra mane kichi nahin tume jebe mote chuin dela dhire ete sitalata kahinpain hum ete sitalata kahinpain.

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3 Responses to “”

  1. Sachikanta Says:

    Ur coments very nice.so i think how u looking.

  2. tingalu Says:

    when will our odi gulls will ever come beyond the kabita in life…

  3. shankar Says:

    nikhoj a chuanre
    kete samparkra maane niruttra hua
    akuha sabu ajanare bi aasi chali ja a
    tume aau tume amitee….

    hey i don’t know much of the poetic feel of the language thoug, it is beacuse i am less exposed to poetry…but i think you were nice..thanks.

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